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Even Shadows need love friend by ~call-me-Karei:iconcall-me-Karei:





In love with a shadow...
I've promised it my heart
Promised to wait for it till the end of days.
The night is a comfort, the day is a pain.
In love with a shadow I pray for the rain,
when all the clouds blot out the sun and me and my lover can be as one.
In love with a shadow.... a useless drain.
I cry alone in a well lit hall, I wish the walls would fall,
I wish for a forest to swallow me up, I wish for the sun to set.
Tear my hair out, bite my nails, crack my bones and tether my feet-I hate this.
You all bath me in light, all I ask for is night.
I'm in love with a shadow, why isn't that alright?
©2007-2009 ~call-me-Karei
:iconcall-me-karei:

Author's Comments

So... This is my feeble attempt at writing poetry.

Um.... the first line was intended for me.... But then as I was writing another character came to mind.... two of them actually.... and then a friend reminded me of two more.

But it's really just for him. The first one. He was the one I was thinking of when I was writing this- so I dedicate it to him, and his love. I don't know if he'd ever word it this way, I don't know him as well as I probably should. . . . but I'm sure his love would like it.

Aand. now I know how Shirt Guy Dom feels writing and drawing with that track 8 ball.
Yeah, so anyway, no flaming me please? I know it's not very good.

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:iconcall-me-karei:
to clarify- love, friend. as in, love then pause, friend. Not love friend like love doll. lol.

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The battle of the sexes will never be won or decided... there is too much fraternizing with the enemy ~ :XD:
:iconneongenesis-endsong:
Its full of emotion and i like the way you have used shadow and light, so my dear Karei i find it very beautiful. good work :)

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"Man fears the darkness, and so he scrapes away at the edges of it with fire."
:iconliebeflustern:
It is most lovely. You have a way with words! It's been a while since I wrote any poetry, lol. You have just inspired me! <3

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A terrible mind is a thing to waste.
:iconcall-me-karei:
:hug: :) Thank you

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The battle of the sexes will never be won or decided... there is too much fraternizing with the enemy ~ :XD:
:iconcall-me-karei:
xD ^_^!

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The battle of the sexes will never be won or decided... there is too much fraternizing with the enemy ~ :XD:
:iconartificial-haven:
beautiful poetry dear :heart:

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"People are forever finding something wrong with you" - Brigitte Bardot
:iconcall-me-karei:
:) Thank you :hug:

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The battle of the sexes will never be won or decided... there is too much fraternizing with the enemy ~ :XD:
:iconartificial-haven:
you're welcome sweet heart :hug:

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"People are forever finding something wrong with you" - Brigitte Bardot
:iconcall-me-karei:
:) :glomp: :hug:

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The battle of the sexes will never be won or decided... there is too much fraternizing with the enemy ~ :XD:

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